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Centuries I live and forever more,
Alone and forbbiden from light.
Nothing but cold, I stand in shadow,
People frightened by my sight.

A fair lady sees past the pale
And into my still beating heart.
...Could this be love I feel?
What is this beautiful piece of art?

We escaped together hand in hand.
Only now can I experience feeling.
Light may ignite me to ashes,
But her love is there for healing.

Her family and friends disagree.
How could I ever do the things they accuse?
I, too, can experience emotions.
My love, I will not lose.

In the bright of day, they steal her.
Kill her, I could not stop her death.
Rage consumes my eternal soul.
My one and only has lost all breath.

...Track them down.
Kill them all.
My revenge will be felt.
They will surely fall.

Wipe my tears as I smear their blood.
The wall covered with stain.
God is dead, and in his place
The demon defining pain.
Dracula
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Japvampgirl Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014
This is powerful... Well done.
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Oroka-Rixa Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
beautiful
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DvArtGal13 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
lovely
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Artaniss87 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
Beautiful! So deeply disturbed yet soulful, love it.
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TheAcidSkull Featured By Owner May 31, 2014
Awesome!
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petra-dragoste Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Hey, If I credit you, can I use this is a fiction?
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Chrisman1991 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
Awesome! Here's the seal of Vlad Tepes Dracula chrisman1991.deviantart.com/ar….
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ladypurpledreamer Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Professional Writer
awesome
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Chynna97 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Poetry is so touching..and I love this
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Nessima-Beaumont Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i love it and the emotions of this piece can be felt. I could feel the love her had for her and to have it taken away T_T 
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CalebZX Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
So beautiful, I feel like crying. a wonderful poem of the dark lord himself. An excellent piece of work. props to you my friend. 
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Silverclaw2968 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
I don't usually read poetry, but this one managed to convince me to give poetry a chance. Well done!
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Lady-Ceridwen Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is.... wow! its..... man, its so amazing its beyond words :) great job!
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GilPires Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
Great Poem THUMBS UP!
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Sebastianthesilent Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
Stunning work, I love the way that it is so well crafted. Thank you for posting this[link]
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HorseRidingRebel Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Wow.... That's amazing. :)
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HannahIshAmazing Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing!
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Zer0thea Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
WWWAAAHHHH!!!! That poem is so beautiful and full of emotions that I felt Dracula's pain! My friend and I read this and I cried! He gave me a hug though. r-:
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Life-of-Art Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012
this poem is beautiful, thank you for sharing it :)
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jackthelantern Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
that was awesome .. Thank you for the beautiful poem
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Mabitsa Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012
This is amazing! This paints a true picture of Dracula's heart (Y).
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White-Rabbit132 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
holy cow! poor Drac... :(
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Gigantlover20 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011
woah... im one hell of a dracula fan and wow... it feels as if i was him during your poem.
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RainfallElectricity Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Do you realize how jealous your poetry skills have now made me?

Very visual, very emotional, very well-structured, very good word choice. You're very good at this poetry thing in ways most people can only dream of being. :)
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writinggal678 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2011
Wow, very strong!
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Monkeyface10 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011
You make me sympathise with him. 'Yes, I can too love; you yourselves can tell it from the past.' Is this the past he speaks of?
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MrE1967 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
I’m adding this to our Featured Favorites at #TheVampyreArmy
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buttontree177 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011
Oh! I agree with Dracula! It's beautiful!
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BlueYoukai Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow... I almost feel his pain while reading.
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Bronwen-Amaia Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I was with soundninja888 when she wrote her comment, and now that I'm a member, I found this again, so I'm faving it

and yes, I do call myself a Castlevania nerd
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eViLdEmOn124 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010
beautiful!
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blushedbloodcuts69 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2010
This is wonderful.
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Sexy-Zexy Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010
I love it!!! I'm sorely tempted to write a drac and mina lemon after reading this!
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cutestlilpotionmaker Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2010  Student General Artist
This is beautiful :)
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Voaz-Vixen Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2009
i cried while reading it. you did well with it. i love these stories. i thinknm Drac, is misunderstood. he may have been a nasty and vial tyrant when he was human and he may take the lives of others, but beneath he is not a monster, but a human locked in side one. i have a story like it, but with a happier ending, but plenty of gore to get there, it's my other application, you can look if you want, bnut hey, keep up the poetry. youre good, :iconclaira-cheetah:
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VintaVonVoffs Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009
whaaa!!!<3:heart:
Beautifull poem!!!
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vlad5drake Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2009
I love it
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soundninja888 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2009
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
Its so beautiful but its SO FLIPPIN SAD.
(This coming from Castlevania nerds)
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
I think I might cry. . .
T.T
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Slave2Songs Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2009
The last lines are EPIC. Very very good, I like :D
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Servina Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2009
simply beautiful :blackrose:
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Frontierx Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2009
That was absolutely beautiful.
I love it!
:+fav:
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AtlanaCullen Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh I LOVE dracula!!!!!
*adds this to favs!*
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Shiva-suffix Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2008  Student Interface Designer
this reminds me of Meier and his story!
great work!^^
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amielric1 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2008
hmm dracula.. poor thing
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tanksmallcape Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
that shit be deep
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blu-ish Featured By Owner May 20, 2008
my, how very capturing. I loved the last sentence the most.
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bwett1 Featured By Owner May 20, 2008
I'm glad you enjoy it.
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WibSkelDS9 Featured By Owner May 18, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful :D
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bwett1 Featured By Owner May 20, 2008
thank you!
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sayagirl Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2008
wow im speechless
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