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Centuries I live and forever more,
Alone and forbbiden from light.
Nothing but cold, I stand in shadow,
People frightened by my sight.

A fair lady sees past the pale
And into my still beating heart.
...Could this be love I feel?
What is this beautiful piece of art?

We escaped together hand in hand.
Only now can I experience feeling.
Light may ignite me to ashes,
But her love is there for healing.

Her family and friends disagree.
How could I ever do the things they accuse?
I, too, can experience emotions.
My love, I will not lose.

In the bright of day, they steal her.
Kill her, I could not stop her death.
Rage consumes my eternal soul.
My one and only has lost all breath.

...Track them down.
Kill them all.
My revenge will be felt.
They will surely fall.

Wipe my tears as I smear their blood.
The wall covered with stain.
God is dead, and in his place
The demon defining pain.
Dracula
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Artaniss87 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
Beautiful! So deeply disturbed yet soulful, love it.
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TheAcidSkull Featured By Owner May 31, 2014
Awesome!
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petra-dragoste Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hey, If I credit you, can I use this is a fiction?
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Chrisman1991 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
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fandomverse95 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Professional Writer
awesome
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Chynna97 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Poetry is so touching..and I love this
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Nessima-Beaumont Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i love it and the emotions of this piece can be felt. I could feel the love her had for her and to have it taken away T_T 
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CalebZX Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
So beautiful, I feel like crying. a wonderful poem of the dark lord himself. An excellent piece of work. props to you my friend. 
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Silverclaw2968 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
I don't usually read poetry, but this one managed to convince me to give poetry a chance. Well done!
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Lady-Ceridwen Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is.... wow! its..... man, its so amazing its beyond words :) great job!
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